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But, headline
first in the NCDC and GISS estimates. should read one of the two warmest
[Richard Soulen (Reviewers comment ID #: 248-39)] rather than one of the warmest two
3-119 A 3:16 3:16 Perhaps 'warmer' is better than 'ahead'.
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[Richard B. Alley (Reviewers comment ID #: 4-10)]
6-6 A 0:0 Overall, this Chapter is well-written and comprehensive. The posing of specific questions Noted, revised as needed
at the start of each section is appreciated.
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melting of the ice on land, and thus apparently exclude the melting of icebergs and by
inference discharge from Antarctica and large areas of Greenland.
[Richard Hindmarsh (Reviewers comment ID #: 106-6)]
4-265 A 24:40 24:40 Consistent with what? Acceptedtext modified.
[Chris Folland (Reviewers comment ID #: 71-122)]
4-266 A 24:42 Note that, once ice is afloat, it already contributed to the sea level.
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But their variations greatly differ from year to year. (ref.
Rorsch A, Thoenes D and Courtney RS, (E&E v10 no2 (2005)). Indeed, on Page 2-11
Chapter 2 Section 2.2 Line 14 the draft Chapter admits that the airborne fraction of CO2
varies between 30% to 80% on 2 year time scales.
2.
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Text corrected
[William Kininmonth (Reviewers comment ID #: 128-7)]
TS-114 A 6:3 6:3 I think carbon monoxide is not removed by washout Text has been clarified
[Yukitomo TSUTSUMI (Reviewers comment ID #: 270-2)]
TS-115 A 6:4 Replace "through" with "by" Agreed
[Richard Soulen (Reviewers comment ID #: 248-24)]
TS-116 A 6:6 Remove semicolon and change "due to" to "caused by" Agreed but no semicolon to remove
[Richard Soulen (Reviewers comment ID #: 248-25)]
TS-117 A 6:9 6:50 In this section it would be useful to compare the different radiative forcings using %'s or It is problematic to compare individual
fractions - eg the radiative forcing due to methane is currently ~1/3 that of CO2, and the terms to the total RF including aerosol
forcing of nitrous oxide is about 1/3 that of methane.
Chapter 3. Observations: Surface and Atmosphetic Climate Change. page 3-124. 337
Siegmund, Chris D. Thorncroft, Peter W. Thorne,
18 Sakari M. Uppala, Russell S. Vose, Bin Wang, Stephen G. Warren, Richard Washington, Matthew C.
19 Wheeler, Bruce A. Wielicki, Takmeng Wong, David B.Wuertz.
20
21 Review Editors: Brian J.
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The reverse is
true at the surface with only a limited number of high quality point measurements but
providing an excellent temporal coverage."
[Richard Allan (Reviewers comment ID #: 3-43)]
3-610 A 37:0 Section 3.4.4 Radiation. This section fails to mention the many high quality satellite-Accept, Text modified as suggested..
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This
could be used to support a number of statements made in the text - I provide some specific
suggestions for this below.
[Richard Betts (Reviewers comment ID #: 21-2)]
11-10 A 0:0 Chapter 11 is clear and comprehensive.
Chapter 8. Climate Models and their Evaluation. page 8-113. 887
Osborn, T. Pavlova, V. Petoukhov, T. Phillips
17 (PCMDI), S. Power, S. Rahmstorf, S. Raper, H. Renssen, D. Rind, M. Roberts, A. Rosati (GFDL), C. Schär
18 (ETH), J. Scinnoca, A. Schmittner (OSU), D.
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[Govt. of India (Reviewers comment ID #: 2013-2)]
TS-134 A 6:24 6:24 In saying "any similar period", how far back does this go?