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[James S. Wang (Reviewers comment ID #: 281-6)]
SPM- A 10:1 It is proposed to delete the last part of the sentence ("although uncertainties accepted
860 2 renmain").
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"atmosphere, aerosols." or
atmosphere (aerosols)." 14 1-14 14
[Richard Allan (Reviewers comment ID #: 3-15)]
1-449 A 38:26 38:26 Sentence should read: Rain typically clears aersols
Accepted.
[Wilmer Anderson (Reviewers comment ID #: 5-5)]
1-450 A 38:27 38:27 Change "sulphate containing" to "sulphate-containing".
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Accepted.
[Michel J. ROSSI (Reviewers comment ID #: 220-14)]
2-229 A 7:26 Capitalize "Northern . . . ' 969 2-969 34 See 2-228.
[Richard Soulen (Reviewers comment ID #: 248-14)]
2-230 A 8:0 9: It migh be good to mention the following things: The concept of radiative forcing Rejected.
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[Wilmer Anderson (Reviewers comment ID #: 5-17)]
1-491 A 40:20
can (in principle) change the weather pattern
" alternative suggestion: "can in Accepted.
principle change (although not cause) a weather pattern
[Richard Allan (Reviewers comment ID #: 3-18)]
1-492 A 40:20 Suggest making this example politically neutral by removing specific country references Accepted.
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model doesn't resolve the thinning events (in the Peninsula) alluded to above. I don't think
that this sentence helps.
[Richard Hindmarsh (Reviewers comment ID #: 106-8)]
4-286 A 26:31 26:31 It would help to give the lat. and long. of the Helheim glacier.
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Perhaps more of a question for Chapter 8
models not good enough.
[Richard Allan (Reviewers comment ID #: 3-25)]
3-202 A 5:18 :19 The AMO is not universally accepted as a true atmospheric circulation pattern.
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See Betts et al 2004, TAC, for full discussion.
[Richard Betts (Reviewers comment ID #: 21-14)]
11-998 A 54:2 54:13 The paper by Tebaldi et al (2006) show some simulation of extremes in South America Tebaldi et al (2006) will be quoted.
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Additional references GPS Ro should be included, for example:
[Richard Anthes]
3-949 A 26:0 Yuan, L., R. A. Anthes, R. H. Ware, C. Rocken, W. D. Bonner, M. Bevis, S. Businger, Continued.
1993: Sensing climate change using the Global Positioning System.
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[Richard Allan (Reviewers comment ID #: 3-28)]
3-245 A 7:17 7:29 If these definitions are consistent with those used in Chapter 9, may be there is not need to Removed.
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[Richard Allan (Reviewers comment ID #: 3-36)]
3-536 A 30:30 30:31 We are discussing microwave so this reference to infra-red effects is of very low utility Changed, see 3-533, we are discussing
and should be dropped.