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[Richard Soulen (Reviewers comment ID #: 248-7)]
SPM- A 6:15 6:16 Suggest deleting 1 W m-2 per degC of global average temperature increase, or Agreed.
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to simulate humidity changes induced by an external global scale forcing."]
[Richard Allan (Reviewers comment ID #: 3-82)]
8-581 A 46:15 46:16 line break messed up Accepted, text modified.
[William Ingram (Reviewers comment ID #: 114-189)]
8-582 A 46:20 46:21 I am not sure that the statement that climate perturbation from Pinatubo is small.... is Rejected.
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Agreed
[Richard Soulen (Reviewers comment ID #: 248-22)]
TS-76 A 5:13 5:13 Change sentence to read: "
.
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see also Andersson paper (Tellus) referenced in Wakelin et al. I don't have the exact
reference to hand, and Jevrejeva S., Moore, J.C., Woodworth, P.L. and Grinsted, A. 2005.
Influence of large scale atmospheric circulation on European sea level: results based on
the wavelet transform method.
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[Richard Allan (Reviewers comment ID #: 3-34)]
3-275 A 10:5 11:10 In the next few rows I repeat comments supplied in review of the FOD, none of which Noted, they were dealt with via
have been dealt with. rejection.
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I know there has been much discussion of how to
present this, and if what we have is the best that can be achieved, I think it is OK.
[Comment also sent to Ch 5]
[Richard Wood (Reviewers comment ID #: 294-13)]
9-712 A 40:39 Replace "explained" by "simulated" or "reproduced". Models do not "explain".
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[Richard Allan (Reviewers comment ID #: 3-81)]
8-579 A 45:46 45:46 "in part" - "largely" would give a more accurate impression Accepted, text modified.
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Moreover it is too hard to explain for a SPM
[Michael Manton (Reviewers comment ID #: 157-23)]
SPM- A 4:0 Abcissa caption should be revised and abcissa values (years) should be stated in Accepted - will use year before present
250 a more conventional way
[Richard Soulen (Reviewers comment ID #: 248-2)]
SPM- A 4:0 Consider eliminating the fourth, lowest graph.
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[Hendrik M. van Aken]
8-415 A 25:26 Missing "a" in "atmosphere" Accepted.
[Richard Allan]
8-416 A 25:26 Atmosphere missing an A. Accepted.
[Philip Mote]
8-417 A 25:27 25:31 Since the top of atmospheric radiative fluxes are often tuned to agree with ERBE data, the Noted.
Chapter 4. Observations: Changes in Snow, Ice and Frozen Ground. page 4-54. 410
Isaksen, P. Jansson, A. Jenkins, I. Joughin, C. Kottmeier, R. Kwok, S.
11 Laxon, D. MacAyeal, K. C. McDonald, H. Melling, A. Ohmura, A. Payne, T. Prowse, B. Raup, C.
12 Raymond, E. Rignot, I. Rigor, D.