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increases as well as precipitation increases expected in glaciated regions have been
incorporated (I believe they have been, but wording is unclear
)
[Richard B. Alley (Reviewers comment ID #: 4-17)]
10-1052 A 57:57 57:57 Typo? Accepted.
[ European Commission (Reviewers comment ID #: 2008-68)]
10-1053 A 57:57 57:57 Is it really 2550% (25x)?
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an obscure analagy.
[Richard Allan (Reviewers comment ID #: 3-17)]
1-489 A 40:15 40:15 Sentence should read: Using physics based concepts that govern how the atmosphere
Accepted.
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Accepted; has been included
[Richard Betts (Reviewers comment ID #: 21-9)]
11-1108 A 62:20 sea ice also affects the atmospheric moisture source and oceanic salinity (fresh water and Noted.
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lines are added there for convenience of display but are based on a different method
(LGM).
[Richard Wood]
10-1239 A 71:37 71:38 Add the following reference between lines 37 and 38: "Caires, S., V. R. Swail, and X. L. References have been revised and
Wang, 2005: Projection and analysis of extreme wave climate.
Chapter 3. Observations: Surface and Atmosphetic Climate Change. page 3-1. 214
Siegmund, Chris D. Thorncroft, Peter W. Thorne,
18 Sakari M. Uppala, Russell S. Vose, Bin Wang, Stephen G. Warren, Richard Washington, Matthew C.
19 Wheeler, Bruce A. Wielicki, Takmeng Wong, David B. Wuertz.
20
21 Review Editors: Brian J.
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[Richard Betts (Reviewers comment ID #: 21-3)]
11-59 A 2:34 2:34 Replace "climate change" by "changes in the climate" Rejected, no justification given.
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Agree that statement that "only
remaining over the method) indirect estimates exist" is incorrect.
[Richard Wood (Reviewers comment ID #: 294-9)]
5-260 A 13:11 13:11 "changes in " before "ocean circulation"? Accept.
[Govt. of Australia (Reviewers comment ID #: 2001-279)]
5-261 A 13:17 13:17 upper km is there a number missing before "km"?
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See 9-721
[Govt. of United States of America (Reviewers comment ID #: 2023-616)]
9-723 A 41:20 Suggest adding the words "over 5 samples taken" after "30%" Accepted.
[Richard Wood (Reviewers comment ID #: 294-15)]
9-724 A 41:30 41:30 Replace "anthropogenic" with "human-induced" Rejected.
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How about an iron? have warmed themselves from the IR
[Richard Allan (Reviewers comment ID #: 3-16)] radiation from a fire.
1-458 A 38:39 38:39 Sentence should read:
a surface must have a temperature around
In addition to the Accepted.
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[Govt. of Canada (Reviewers comment ID #: 2004-179)]
8-566 A 43:38 43:38 in approach with -> with approach in Rejected. Would not improve the text.
[Govt. of Finland (Reviewers comment ID #: 2009-93)]
8-567 A 43:39 43:39 we will -> we shall Rejected.