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As a corollary of this responsiveness, stomatal frequency analysis of fossil
leaves enables the detection and quantification of atmospheric CO2 changes at different
time scales (14, 17-25).
[Richard Courtney (Reviewers comment ID #: 49-48)]
TS-119 A 6:11 6:35 Looks like the the ref. to Fig TS1 should be TS2 (line 11) and TS2 should be TS1 (line 35) Agreed.
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Measurements have been made by several
[Richard Courtney (Reviewers comment ID #: 49-2)] labs around the word and they provide identical results.
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The body of the report says
that only projections - not predictions - are possible.
[Richard Courtney (Reviewers comment ID #: 49-40)]
TS-40 A 3:28 3:29 This parenthetic definition of the climate system excludes (unfrozen) soils and rivers of the Not practical to list each of the many
continents.
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[2.3]
[Richard Courtney (Reviewers comment ID #: 49-44)]
TS-87 A 5:33 5:34 Replace "The dominant " by "An important" Changes in the sun may also be important See comment TS-86
[VINCENT GRAY (Reviewers comment ID #: 88-1902)]
TS-88 A 5:33 5:41 The reader needs better guidance as to where to find the information supporting this Table is too large to include further
statement.
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[Lenny Bernstein (Reviewers comment ID #: 20-17)]
TS-162 A 7:3 7:3 I strongly suggest that the emission rates either be reported for years (e.g. 2004) based on Accepted.
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Science vol. 284 p 92 (1999)).
[Richard Courtney (Reviewers comment ID #: 49-49)]
TS- A 55:0 55: Explanation for symbols used in graphic TS-1 is missing Figure redrawn and caption changed
1235 [Govt. of Germany (Reviewers comment ID #: 2011-224)]
TS- A 55:0 Fig.
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would provide a greater negative feedback than the effect of a doubling of carbon dioxide
with the maximum possible positive radiative feedback from water vapour.
[Richard Courtney (Reviewers comment ID #: 49-43)]
TS-58 A 4:32 4:35 These spurious "statistical" categories are just self-assessed guesses Rejected - the bases for probabilistic
[VINCENT GRAY (Reviewers comment ID #: 88-1901)] assessments of likelihoods are covered
in the report.
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The statement that, Present atmospheric levels of methane are unprecedented in at least
the last half million years. is a blatant lie. Delete it.
[Richard S Courtney]
2-38 A 14:9 14:17 The statements in the paragraph on Page 2-14 Chapter 2 Section 2.3.2 Lines 9 to 17 are Comment not scientific in nature
such arrant nonsense that they are not worthy of mention and, therefore, the paragraph
should be deleted.
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[Richard Courtney (Reviewers comment ID #: 49-64)]
TS-199 A 8:25 8:25 Insert after "declined" , "to zero" Rejected - growth rate values are cited
[VINCENT GRAY (Reviewers comment ID #: 88-1917)] in the text and are not zero.
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If the natural
system of sinks copes with the emissions as they occur then the emissions cannot
accumulate.
[Richard S Courtney]
2-34 A 11:54 11:54 A frustration of attempting to peer review this astonishingly poor draft report is the clear Rejected.