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Stomata data do not suffer from these problems and indicate that the recent rates
of change to atmospheric concentration of carbon dioxide have repeatedly
occurred in recent millennia and during transition from the last ice age.
[Richard Courtney (Reviewers comment ID #: 49-3)]
SPM- A 3:30 3:30 Add at beginning "Most of the".
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As a corollary of this responsiveness, stomatal frequency analysis of fossil
leaves enables the detection and quantification of atmospheric CO2 changes at different
time scales (14, 17-25).
[Richard Courtney (Reviewers comment ID #: 49-53)]
TS-148 A 6:42 6:42 Refer to Figure TS-2.
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SPM Comment: Delete the word Widespread because the table does not show
that (it only says they happened), and the word widespread is not defined or
justified in the table or the bulk of the document.
[Richard Courtney (Reviewers comment ID #: 49-15)]
SPM- A 8:17 8:18 Slightly picky comment, but speaking of "warm" and "cold" temperatures is like Rejected.
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The inherent errors Rejected, see chapters 8 and 10.
1023 2 2 of the simulations are not known so the outputs of the simulations cannot be
quantitative (a result is not quantitative merely because it is presented as a
number).
[Richard Courtney (Reviewers comment ID #: 49-26)]
SPM- A 11:4 11:4 Model intercomparisons may not represent the full range of structural Reject comment.
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This emphasized by the sentence of
the TS (p TS-8 lines 31-32 that admits the uncertainties concerning natural sources.
[Richard Courtney (Reviewers comment ID #: 49-65)]
TS-203 A 8:27 8:28 how can we know the sum of the emissions better than we know the individual Sentence added for clarification
components?
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However,
it cannot be excluded that the production rate from other sources, such as microbiological
activity, among others, could have increased.
[Richard Courtney (Reviewers comment ID #: 49-46)]
TS-99 A 5:48 5:48 Insert before "carbon" "water vapour" Rejected - the sentence is about long
[VINCENT GRAY (Reviewers comment ID #: 88-1905)] lived species that are emitted and as
covered in Chapter 2 anthropogenic
water vapor emissions are not
significant.
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[Govt. of United Kingdom (Reviewers comment ID #: 2022-134)]
SPM- A 10:1 I would think that one could characterize this with some confidence as "very" Rejected.
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imply that physical reasoning leads to this expectation.
[Richard Courtney (Reviewers comment ID #: 49-31)]
SPM- A 12:2 12:2 Add at end "But it is not known to what extent" Rejected no rationale given
1134 2 2 [VINCENT GRAY (Reviewers comment ID #: 88-2240)]
SPM- A 12:2 12:3 There is a contradiction between the decades given on top of the plots (2011- Accepted.
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ludicrously ambitious.
[Richard Courtney (Reviewers comment ID #: 49-36)]
SPM- A 14:2 14:3 This seems to me a little more obvious and missing out the more important point Partly accepted.
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If their accumulated errors were at the rate of [0.2
degrees C / 30 years] throughout the twentieth century, then this would account
for all the ~0.6 degrees C rise they indicate occurred throughout that century.
[Richard Courtney (Reviewers comment ID #: 49-10)]
SPM- A 6:38 6:38 Replace "linear" with "average".