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Statement reworded. 977 0 1 [Govt. of United Kingdom (Reviewer’s comment ID #: 2022-140)] SPM- A 11:2 Add the word “fewer” before “frost”.

The TAR said that since the industrial revolution, the build-up of human-caused greenhouse gases in the atmosphere has had a warming effect of only 2.4 W/sq m. [Richard Courtney (Reviewer’s comment ID #: 49-18)] SPM- A 10:1 10:1 Replace "greenhouse gas forcing" with "increases in human population, Rejected, see chapter 3 McKitrick & Michaels has 864 4 4 prosperity, energy usage and land-use changes".

has been carefully described. See ch 3 figure on heavy [Richard Courtney (Reviewer’s comment ID #: 49-16)] precip for distribution of the changes SPM- A 8:49 8:50 This sentence is too vague; does it apply to convective precipitation, to Chapters note that the definition of heavy precip is 739 monsoons?

If such concerns were raised then they would be mistaken. [Richard Courtney (Reviewer’s comment ID #: 49-34)] SPM- A 13:4 13:4 Add to this sentence something like " and with conditions detrimental to high- Reject.

[Richard Courtney (Reviewer’s comment ID #: 49-4)] SPM- A 3:39 3:39 After "contributed" insert "about" See SPM-197 208 [VINCENT GRAY (Reviewer’s comment ID #: 88-2146)] SPM- A 3:39 3:39 The phrasing here is confusing.

Hence, the actual warming of recent decades not known (but - on the basis of the radiosonde and MSU data - it seems most likely to have been less than 0.1 degrees C per decade ) and, therefore, “agreement with observations” is meaningless. [Richard Courtney (Reviewer’s comment ID #: 49-32)] SPM- A 13:1 13:1 Don't like the wording, or I don't know what it means.

Detailed discussion in chapter. [Joanna House (Reviewer’s comment ID #: 109-42)] SPM- A 8:3 8:3 State over which period the loss of land ice occurred Text has been edited 634 [Rolf Müller (Reviewer’s comment ID #: 181-6)] SPM- A 8:3 "land ice" - what is this?

Hence, it is invalid to attribute any causes - anthropogenic or otherwise - to “the observed warming of northern hemisphere over the last 50 years” [Richard Courtney (Reviewer’s comment ID #: 49-25)] SPM- A 11:3 11:3 After the inclusion of the new chapeau (last comment) delete the text in line 32 Text has been clarified 998 2 5 to 35 completely.

.” [Richard Courtney (Reviewer’s comment ID #: 49-50)] TS-124 A 6:17 6:18 Replace "unprecedented in at least' with "thought to be grteater than that of" Rejected, no basis for change given.

Stomata data do not suffer from these problems and indicate that the recent rates of change to atmospheric concentration of carbon dioxide have repeatedly occurred in recent millennia and during transition from the last ice age. [Richard Courtney (Reviewer’s comment ID #: 49-3)] SPM- A 3:30 3:30 Add at beginning "Most of the".