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Intergovernmental Panel on Climate Change Papers; IPCC Fourth Assessment Report Papers: Working Group I, The Physical Science Basis of Climate Change, 2005-2007; Expert Review Comments on First-Order Draft, Chapter 2. ESPP IPCCAR4WG1. Environmental Science and Public Policy Archives. Harvard College Library, Cambridge, Mass. page 380. 380
[Richard S Courtney]
2-45 A 19:39 19:39 Between from and is insert the missing phrase five different data sets. Reworded as suggested
[Richard S Courtney]
2-46 A 19:49 19:49 To correct the grammar, replace decrease with decreased.
Intergovernmental Panel on Climate Change Papers; IPCC Fourth Assessment Report Papers: Working Group I, The Physical Science Basis of Climate Change, 2005-2007; Expert Review Comments on First-Order Draft, Chapter 1. ESPP IPCCAR4WG1. Environmental Science and Public Policy Archives. Harvard College Library, Cambridge, Mass. page 126. 126
[Richard S Courtney]
1-57 A 24:9 24:10 For accuracy, replace the words could not be explained by natural internal variability Rejected.
Intergovernmental Panel on Climate Change Papers; IPCC Fourth Assessment Report Papers: Working Group I, The Physical Science Basis of Climate Change, 2005-2007; Expert Review Comments on First-Order Draft, Chapter 1. ESPP IPCCAR4WG1. Environmental Science and Public Policy Archives. Harvard College Library, Cambridge, Mass. page 119. 119
This is true for all
conclusions published in all scientific papers.
[Richard S Courtney]
1-20 A 6:17 6:17 Delete the word well because it is an irrelevant - and self aggrandising - opinion. Accepted.
Intergovernmental Panel on Climate Change Papers; IPCC Fourth Assessment Report Papers: Working Group I, The Physical Science Basis of Climate Change, 2005-2007; Expert Review Comments on First-Order Draft, Chapter 1. ESPP IPCCAR4WG1. Environmental Science and Public Policy Archives. Harvard College Library, Cambridge, Mass. page 134. 134
Expert Review Comments on First-Order Draft (16 November 2005) IPCC Working Group I Fourth Assessment Report
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[Richard S Courtney]
1-83 A 47:0 In the Figure title, between of the and components insert major because the title Taken into account.
Intergovernmental Panel on Climate Change Papers; IPCC Fourth Assessment Report Papers: Working Group I, The Physical Science Basis of Climate Change, 2005-2007; Expert Review Comments on First-Order Draft, Chapter 1. ESPP IPCCAR4WG1. Environmental Science and Public Policy Archives. Harvard College Library, Cambridge, Mass. page 125. 125
Expert Review Comments on First-Order Draft (16 November 2005) IPCC Working Group I Fourth Assessment Report
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[Richard S Courtney]
1-44 A 19:22 19:23 Delete the clause, , and mathematical errors
this overestimate. or cite the Accepted. Text has been edited to
mathematical errors because the statement in the draft is an assertion of prejudice and not reflect the fact that we do not attempt to
fact. assess the causes of the errors in
[Richard S Courtney] Langleys work.
1-45 A 19:48 19:48 For accuracy and completeness, after the twentieth century. add This indicates that the Taken into account.
Intergovernmental Panel on Climate Change Papers; IPCC Fourth Assessment Report Papers: Working Group I, The Physical Science Basis of Climate Change, 2005-2007; Expert Review Comments on First-Order Draft, Chapter 1. ESPP IPCCAR4WG1. Environmental Science and Public Policy Archives. Harvard College Library, Cambridge, Mass. page 118. 118
stated in Page 1-6 Section 1.3 Lines 24 to 27.
[Richard S Courtney]
1-12 A 4:50 4:50 Replace the international community of scientists with an international community of Rejected.
Intergovernmental Panel on Climate Change Papers; IPCC Fourth Assessment Report Papers: Working Group I, The Physical Science Basis of Climate Change, 2005-2007; Expert Review Comments on First-Order Draft, Chapter 1. ESPP IPCCAR4WG1. Environmental Science and Public Policy Archives. Harvard College Library, Cambridge, Mass. page 120. 120
atmospheric CO2 concentration. (Rorsch A, Thoenes D and Courtney RS, (E&E v10 no2
(2005)).
[Richard S Courtney]
1-25 A 7:9 7:9 Replace continues with continued because the grammatical error is misleading.
Intergovernmental Panel on Climate Change Papers; IPCC Fourth Assessment Report Papers: Working Group I, The Physical Science Basis of Climate Change, 2005-2007; Expert Review Comments on First-Order Draft, Chapter 1. ESPP IPCCAR4WG1. Environmental Science and Public Policy Archives. Harvard College Library, Cambridge, Mass. page 129. 129
Nature, vol. 409, 695-697 (2000)).
[Richard S Courtney]
1-68 A 25:56 25:56 For accuracy, and completeness, after
part of a natural cycle. replace The with Noted, fixed in a different way.
Intergovernmental Panel on Climate Change Papers; IPCC Fourth Assessment Report Papers: Working Group I, The Physical Science Basis of Climate Change, 2005-2007; Expert Review Comments on First-Order Draft, Chapter 1. ESPP IPCCAR4WG1. Environmental Science and Public Policy Archives. Harvard College Library, Cambridge, Mass. page 122. 122
[Richard S Courtney]
1-34 A 12:33 12:33 Replace the phrase the scientific attitude with the attitude of many scientists because Noted.
Intergovernmental Panel on Climate Change Papers; IPCC Fourth Assessment Report Papers: Working Group I, The Physical Science Basis of Climate Change, 2005-2007; Expert Review Comments on First-Order Draft, Chapter 1. ESPP IPCCAR4WG1. Environmental Science and Public Policy Archives. Harvard College Library, Cambridge, Mass. page 117. 117
[Richard S Courtney]
1-5 A 2:45 2:48 Replace all of from The remarkable success .. to
fortunately impossible on the Taken into account.