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[Richard S Courtney] 2-45 A 19:39 19:39 Between “from” and “is” insert the missing phrase “five different data sets”. Reworded as suggested [Richard S Courtney] 2-46 A 19:49 19:49 To correct the grammar, replace “decrease” with “decreased”.

[Richard S Courtney] 1-57 A 24:9 24:10 For accuracy, replace the words “could not be explained by natural internal variability” Rejected.

This is true for all conclusions published in all scientific papers. [Richard S Courtney] 1-20 A 6:17 6:17 Delete the word “well” because it is an irrelevant - and self aggrandising - opinion. Accepted.

Expert Review Comments on First-Order Draft (16 November 2005) IPCC Working Group I Fourth Assessment Report Page:line No. Batch From To Comment Notes [Richard S Courtney] 1-83 A 47:0 In the Figure title, between “of the” and “components” insert “major” because the title Taken into account.

Expert Review Comments on First-Order Draft (16 November 2005) IPCC Working Group I Fourth Assessment Report Page:line No. Batch From To Comment Notes [Richard S Courtney] 1-44 A 19:22 19:23 Delete the clause, “, and mathematical errors … this overestimate.” or cite the Accepted. Text has been edited to mathematical errors because the statement in the draft is an assertion of prejudice and not reflect the fact that we do not attempt to fact. assess the causes of the errors in [Richard S Courtney] Langley’s work. 1-45 A 19:48 19:48 For accuracy and completeness, after “the twentieth century.” add “This indicates that the Taken into account.

stated in Page 1-6 Section 1.3 Lines 24 to 27. [Richard S Courtney] 1-12 A 4:50 4:50 Replace “the international community of scientists” with “an international community of Rejected.

atmospheric CO2 concentration.” (Rorsch A, Thoenes D and Courtney RS, (E&E v10 no2 (2005)). [Richard S Courtney] 1-25 A 7:9 7:9 Replace “continues” with “continued” because the grammatical error is misleading.

Nature, vol. 409, 695-697 (2000)).” [Richard S Courtney] 1-68 A 25:56 25:56 For accuracy, and completeness, after“… part of a natural cycle.” replace “The” with Noted, fixed in a different way.

[Richard S Courtney] 1-34 A 12:33 12:33 Replace the phrase “the scientific attitude” with “the attitude of many scientists” because Noted.

[Richard S Courtney] 1-5 A 2:45 2:48 Replace all of from “The remarkable success ..” to “… fortunately impossible on the Taken into account.