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Statement reworded. 977 0 1 [Govt. of United Kingdom (Reviewer’s comment ID #: 2022-140)] SPM- A 11:2 Add the word “fewer” before “frost”.

The TAR said that since the industrial revolution, the build-up of human-caused greenhouse gases in the atmosphere has had a warming effect of only 2.4 W/sq m. [Richard Courtney (Reviewer’s comment ID #: 49-18)] SPM- A 10:1 10:1 Replace "greenhouse gas forcing" with "increases in human population, Rejected, see chapter 3 McKitrick & Michaels has 864 4 4 prosperity, energy usage and land-use changes".

has been carefully described. See ch 3 figure on heavy [Richard Courtney (Reviewer’s comment ID #: 49-16)] precip for distribution of the changes SPM- A 8:49 8:50 This sentence is too vague; does it apply to convective precipitation, to Chapters note that the definition of heavy precip is 739 monsoons?

If such concerns were raised then they would be mistaken. [Richard Courtney (Reviewer’s comment ID #: 49-34)] SPM- A 13:4 13:4 Add to this sentence something like " and with conditions detrimental to high- Reject.

[Richard Courtney (Reviewer’s comment ID #: 49-4)] SPM- A 3:39 3:39 After "contributed" insert "about" See SPM-197 208 [VINCENT GRAY (Reviewer’s comment ID #: 88-2146)] SPM- A 3:39 3:39 The phrasing here is confusing.

Hence, the actual warming of recent decades not known (but - on the basis of the radiosonde and MSU data - it seems most likely to have been less than 0.1 degrees C per decade ) and, therefore, “agreement with observations” is meaningless. [Richard Courtney (Reviewer’s comment ID #: 49-32)] SPM- A 13:1 13:1 Don't like the wording, or I don't know what it means.

Detailed discussion in chapter. [Joanna House (Reviewer’s comment ID #: 109-42)] SPM- A 8:3 8:3 State over which period the loss of land ice occurred Text has been edited 634 [Rolf Müller (Reviewer’s comment ID #: 181-6)] SPM- A 8:3 "land ice" - what is this?

Hence, it is invalid to attribute any causes - anthropogenic or otherwise - to “the observed warming of northern hemisphere over the last 50 years” [Richard Courtney (Reviewer’s comment ID #: 49-25)] SPM- A 11:3 11:3 After the inclusion of the new chapeau (last comment) delete the text in line 32 Text has been clarified 998 2 5 to 35 completely.

.” [Richard Courtney (Reviewer’s comment ID #: 49-50)] TS-124 A 6:17 6:18 Replace "unprecedented in at least' with "thought to be grteater than that of" Rejected, no basis for change given.

Science vol. 284 p 92 (1999)). [Richard Courtney (Reviewer’s comment ID #: 49-6)] SPM- A 4:0 Better label bottom panel Bottom panel has been deleted. 244 [Dennis Hartmann (Reviewer’s comment ID #: 100-6)] SPM- A 4:0 Figure SPM-1.