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[Richard Courtney (Reviewers comment ID #: 49-61)]
TS-186 A 7:39 7:39 For clarity, consider adding "atmospheric" before "CO2 on terrestrial
" Agreed
[Melinda Marquis (Reviewers comment ID #: 162-105)]
TS-187 A 7:39 7:44 This paragraph uderstates current knowledge.
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[Richard Soulen (Reviewers comment ID #: 248-19)]
TS-37 A 3:8 Replace "over-arching themes" with "evident" and replace "the" with "this" Agreed
[Richard Soulen (Reviewers comment ID #: 248-20)]
TS-38 A 3:10 3:10 It would be helpful to have a second paragraph at line 10 which discusses what is known Text of first paragraph deals with this in
about climate and climate change.
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International Journal of Climatology, vol. 23, 829-845 (2003))
[Richard S Courtney]
1-29 A 10:17 10:17 For accuracy and completeness, after continues to grow. it is important to add: Rejected because it isnt accurate.
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The authors of this chapter seem to be ignorant of the warming effect of sulphate aerosols
combined with soot particles.
[Richard S Courtney]
2-8 A 4:2 4:2 Page 2-4 Chapter 2 Line 2 of the draft says nitrous oxide is the fourth most important Text will be changed.
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al. 2005) (ref. Rorsch A, Thoenes D and Courtney RS, (E&E v10 no2 (2005)).
[Richard S Courtney]
2-30 A 10:15 10:18 Delete everything from the combustion of cement production
to
biomass Rejected.
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(It borders on deception to call opinion of unknown values
expert judgement about the state of that knowledge.)
[Richard Courtney (Reviewers comment ID #: 49-42)]
TS-52 A 4:8 4:9 Reverse order of clauses in sentence to make it clearer.
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[Richard S Courtney]
1-3 A 2:23 2:23 Replace todays comprehensive models of the climate system with todays models of Accepted.
the climate system because no comprehensive model of the climate system has been
developed to date (e.g.
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However,
it cannot be excluded that the production rate from other sources, such as microbiological
activity, among others, could have increased.
[Richard Courtney (Reviewers comment ID #: 49-45)]
TS-96 A 5:47 5:50 Make explicit that the long-lived gases are well mixed in the atmosphere and therefore Accepted.
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It is an
important and significant advance if the IPCC is - at last - starting to consider climate
mechanisms that are more significant to climate change than radiative forcing.
[Richard S Courtney]
2-25 A 8:41 8:41 To avoid being completely misleading and to be factually correct, at the start of Section Agree to some rewording.
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See also the
[Richard S Courtney] response to comment (1-76).
1-63 A 24:32 24:32 For accuracy, replace the words create a with contribute to because the statement in Noted.