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Statement reworded.
977 0 1 [Govt. of United Kingdom (Reviewers comment ID #: 2022-140)]
SPM- A 11:2 Add the word fewer before frost.
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The TAR said that since the
industrial revolution, the build-up of human-caused greenhouse gases in the
atmosphere has had a warming effect of only 2.4 W/sq m.
[Richard Courtney (Reviewers comment ID #: 49-18)]
SPM- A 10:1 10:1 Replace "greenhouse gas forcing" with "increases in human population, Rejected, see chapter 3 McKitrick & Michaels has
864 4 4 prosperity, energy usage and land-use changes".
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has been carefully described. See ch 3 figure on heavy
[Richard Courtney (Reviewers comment ID #: 49-16)] precip for distribution of the changes
SPM- A 8:49 8:50 This sentence is too vague; does it apply to convective precipitation, to Chapters note that the definition of heavy precip is
739 monsoons?
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If such concerns were raised then they would be mistaken.
[Richard Courtney (Reviewers comment ID #: 49-34)]
SPM- A 13:4 13:4 Add to this sentence something like " and with conditions detrimental to high- Reject.
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[Richard Courtney (Reviewers comment ID #: 49-4)]
SPM- A 3:39 3:39 After "contributed" insert "about" See SPM-197
208 [VINCENT GRAY (Reviewers comment ID #: 88-2146)]
SPM- A 3:39 3:39 The phrasing here is confusing.
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Hence, the actual warming of recent decades not known (but - on the basis of the
radiosonde and MSU data - it seems most likely to have been less than 0.1
degrees C per decade ) and, therefore, agreement with observations is
meaningless.
[Richard Courtney (Reviewers comment ID #: 49-32)]
SPM- A 13:1 13:1 Don't like the wording, or I don't know what it means.
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Detailed discussion in chapter.
[Joanna House (Reviewers comment ID #: 109-42)]
SPM- A 8:3 8:3 State over which period the loss of land ice occurred Text has been edited
634 [Rolf Müller (Reviewers comment ID #: 181-6)]
SPM- A 8:3 "land ice" - what is this?
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Hence, it is invalid to attribute any causes - anthropogenic or otherwise - to the
observed warming of northern hemisphere over the last 50 years
[Richard Courtney (Reviewers comment ID #: 49-25)]
SPM- A 11:3 11:3 After the inclusion of the new chapeau (last comment) delete the text in line 32 Text has been clarified
998 2 5 to 35 completely.
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.
[Richard Courtney (Reviewers comment ID #: 49-50)]
TS-124 A 6:17 6:18 Replace "unprecedented in at least' with "thought to be grteater than that of" Rejected, no basis for change given.
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Science
vol. 284 p 92 (1999)).
[Richard Courtney (Reviewers comment ID #: 49-6)]
SPM- A 4:0 Better label bottom panel Bottom panel has been deleted.
244 [Dennis Hartmann (Reviewers comment ID #: 100-6)]
SPM- A 4:0 Figure SPM-1.